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I decided to revise this piece. Added a background and some highlights :]

Beatrix - The Rose Knight
Contest entry for :iconmetalgirly:

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:iconakiriana:
First thing you notice in this piece is the very soft colours and the beautiful Roses of may behind Beatrix!

You can tell who she is right away with the way Vivid did this piece; she looks stunning!

The shading/colouring is very soft and flowing, and the roses in the background are just stunning.

The only couple corrections I can suggest for this piece is she looks like she's missing an upper lip, there's no pink lip colour above the lip line.
Her left elbow should be out a bit more and down a bit, and match up with the bend of her torso (since the bend of our elbows hits the bend in out torso), and her hands should be a bit bigger.

Other then those few minor corrections, she's beautiful! The sword is really well done as well, and I simply love her eye!

nice work! FFIX ftw!
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:iconwhiteknight222:
Wow I think you have awesome coloring skills and have a good hard entry to beat here.

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I love comments and favs, but I don't have time to reply to every one. I can no longer do this. I do my best I'm sorry if this offends some but time spent on praise for favs could be spent on your requests, contests, and art. Please understand I am busy.
:iconvividillustrator:
Thank you! :heart: :) I wasnt completely satisfied with the background on the old one.Since the deadline was extended I decided to give this piece a little more love ^^

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Strength without determination means nothing.
And determination without strength is equally useless.
:iconmilloverte:
Miaw *_*
Miaw again XD Lovely work on her :) I like this version better as well ;)

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:icondarktaru:
Awesome drawing, I love the Background. :) Beatrix came out great too, I like her expression. The only thing I could see wrong with it is the belt buckle, I think its suppose to be bigger. But that might be a preference thing.
:icondarktaru:
PS: Good luck on the contest! :)
:iconmobawakid:
Love the BG , the sword needs more attention , it looks like it was made out of stone and her hips looks a little wider than it should be according to her body mass .

Nonetheless , its a nice work , looking forward to see hinata after coloring :)

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Practice is the key to success .
:iconwhiteknight222:
It shows hun :) Good luck.

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I love comments and favs, but I don't have time to reply to every one. I can no longer do this. I do my best I'm sorry if this offends some but time spent on praise for favs could be spent on your requests, contests, and art. Please understand I am busy.
:iconmagicpotion:
its so good to see you havent drawn a stick thin version of her!
the colouring is beautiful and the background is such a lovely touch to complimate the picture:D

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I s**t kittens.
:iconvividillustrator:
Yeah, originally I had the buckle larger, but it looked kinda silly xD So I tweaked it.

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Strength without determination means nothing.
And determination without strength is equally useless.

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